Monday, October 4, 2010

Poem

So people as I had promised, here is my own poem which I wrote 2 years back, But it is still close to my heart .. so here it goes :) :)


And do suggest a relevant title to it ...

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दिल मे कितनी बाते है,
इनको मै कहु कहा?

जो मेरे पास राज़ है,
ऊसे मै खोलु कहा?

मन् मे इतने दुख है,
उन्हे दफ़नाऊ कहा?

जो खुशियान है,
उन्हे मै बाटु कहा?

कितनी यादे है,
उन्हे सहजकर रखु कहा?

दिल मे जो दद्र् है,
उसे दिखलाऊ कहा?

मन मे जो सवाल है,
उसका जवाब ढुढु कहा?

बुरी आदते भी है,
पर उन्हे मै भुलाऊ कहा?

मेरे सपनो का घर ,
मै बसाऊ कहा,

लगता है किसी साथी की तलाश है,
पर उसे मै तलाशु कहा?
- नेहा

12 comments:

Unknown said...

Amazing is the Only word....Is thhis Your First Poem or just one of the Many you have written.

Richa said...

brilliant :)

how about 'talaash' for title? :)

Neha Mehta said...

@gunjan no its not my first poem but it is the simplest one :) thanks for reading. Do suggest a title for the same

Neha Mehta said...

@richa yep "Talaash" is nice title :) thanks sweety

Unknown said...

hey neha..its really nice one :)

Harsh Mittal said...

Zoya - one who is in search ... Origin Urdu

Aditya Nandode said...

Too many Questions unanswered, and you say its simple! :p Well written, as per me title can be as simple as "Dil mein" But Talash is more refined!

Neha Mehta said...

thanks ankita and harsh

Neha Mehta said...

Thanks aditya .. yeah too many questions :) .. btw talaash is better

Anonymous said...

superb :-)

Neha Mehta said...

thanks u :)

Nidhi said...

ab talash khatam hui neha...